July 2

A dark and strormy night at the haunted house by Jake

Striking in the dark sky crashing and thundering turning the sky to hell, the devil watches.

Three kids,  Jack, the brave/oldest brother, tom the youngest brother and lily/ the bossy, go exploring through the house as Halloween crowds the night there in the field, in the distance, there stands a creepy house possibly haunted by something no-one has ever seen and doesn’t dare to even try.

These kids  had absolutely no idea the risk there about to take.

“why are we here again” whispered tom

“do you ever remember anything? Seriously!” lily stated

“Guys just stop were going into that…” mentioned Jack

They all stop and stare as they see a black figure, with red eyes ,watching there every step.

Opining the gate with a sharp creak,  they enter the lawn as other people call it the trap.. a scream fills there head a scream no-one has ever heard until now.

But something they never thought would happen happened..

Suddenly, Lily gets pulled back and pushed onto the road.

They both scream.

As they try to run back the gate closes and locks its self and at this moment they knew this wasn’t a good plan. The door opens and outcomes…

“What the heck is that?!” yelled tom

Tom’s worst nightmares came to life as he gets pulled by some creepy creature locking him in a bedroom where he’d probably be locked up in there forever, banging on those windows, unless he somehow get saved but now

Jack immediately takes a bad choice running into the house trying to get to the back door definitely for sure he won’t make it out…


Posted July 2, 2020 by jake054 in category Uncategorized

2 thoughts on “A dark and strormy night at the haunted house by Jake

  1. Jackie

    A good gripping opening, made me want to read on. Remember to use capital letters for names. Try not to use / . I really want to know what will happen to Jack in the house.

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    1. jake054 (Post author)

      OOooh so youre ready for part 2? im ready to make it soon. what do you think is going to happen to him?

      Reply

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