July
10
Describing the 3 Witches from Macbeth by Louis
The old witches wore tatty, crumpled clothes and looked very withered. They had beards that stretched across their faces and skinny lips. All of them had very bony fingers and were called weird creatures. They looked very wild with their ragged clothes on. They liked to bow to people and shout.
Excellent language with withered, Louis. It’s a powerful adjective so I would be wary about adding very; I feel it detracts (reduces the value).
So keep pushing your language use like this. Well done.