July 7

Dream Giver

 He pulled his notebook from his back pocket. And crossed of this address. Flying toward the first boy, he laid the dream eggs on his bed. He moved to the girl with the ballerina slippers, he broke the egg, and it followed with a satisfying sound. The yolk dripped on to her slippers. Then formed a golden ballerina who danced as if it was opening night.

He moved onto the next kid, he pored the yolk onto the book half open on his bed. Then formed an Astronaut floating in mid air. The stars shot out, and shone bright in the boys dream. He moved on, he followed with two other children.

Then the worst thing that can possibly happen took place. The boy moved knocking of one of the eggs and on to the page with the wort possible monster, the serpent.


Posted July 7, 2020 by erin055 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Dream Giver

  1. Mr Tudge

    Good observational writing, Erin. Good choice of cliff-hanger sentence (with a small typo.) Minor grammar check – an astronaut is lower case. Perhaps some more of the lead character’s emotions and the children’s re-actions would enhance.

    Well done.

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