June
29
Dangle Part one by Isabelle
The man drudged through the forest. He had a lot of precious time on his hands. Fortunately he didn’t have to go to work till later unlike most people who work for a whole day. This walk he had done many times before and a snowy day like this means he is in for a treat.
After a long walk he finally made it to his peaceful place. But something was different there was a ruby rope hang down. He looked confused. The man Turned round swiftly to see if anyone was there. Nobody. The man pulled it curios. It pinged back nearly hitting him in the face.
I like your ‘back-story’ about him not working 9 to 5. You’ve captured some of his emotion with his confusion & being curious.