June
29
Dangle – PART 1
He started walking, the ice crunching beneath his feat looking up from the hill he could see the chimneys and he could hear the bird chirping.
Finally at the top of the hill. He stopped and stared.
He could almost see a rope. Walking to toward it he stopped he turned and he did the same thing over and over again then he stopped.
He stood about a meter away. Almost in fear, he took one step forward and poked it like he was an annoying five year old poking an older pupil. Once again he poked it. What is this? he questioned himself.
I did spell feat wrong it was supposed to be feet.
Paragraphing is used well to show the change in emphasis. I think your first sentence is actually 2 sentences-check this.