June
29
Dangle by Lewis
He hiked through the snow. He has been on this route thousands of times but never when it has snowed. He looked around. Suddenly, he saw a thing coming from nowhere. He walked over to it. Soon as he figured it out it was an thick red rope. There was a little gold ring going around it. He poked it and it moved. He poked it again but harder it swung back and nearly hit him.
I like the way you reflect on his previous experience of walking this route Lewis. Remember to use your commas to separate out a drop in.
eg Soon, as he figured it out, it was an thick red rope.