April 24

Paradise island 100 word challenge by Jake

Sun in paradise, the statues stand in rows and people stay to watch there EVERY MOVE!…

Different colours were spread around like an exploded firework! As person by peson walked past the figures secretly turn watching there EVERY STEP. Taking photos more to make the statues come alive…. the statues burst eyes wide open SCREAMING towards them with terrifieng teeth ready to BITE. And in a puff of smoke gone, vanished and what lead in the spot they were standing would be enough to make u … FAINT! For not to know what would happed next….. What will? “Wait and see”….

 


Posted April 24, 2020 by jake054 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Paradise island 100 word challenge by Jake

  1. mrsmurrin

    Terrifying teeth is a good alliteration- they sound scary. Take care not to muddle there (over there or there are…) and their (owned).

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