April
23
The Domino Competition-100 word challenge-Olivia
It was the day of the Grand dominos competition. Nerves spead through my team as we took our kit through to the main hall. Our biggest rivals, The Wolves, walked past us looking confident, sure.
The bell rang and every team started building. Suddenly, one domino rally fell over. Just then, we had a disaster; we had run out of dominos! Quick thinking Tom sprinted over to the van, brought out another box and ran. Unxpectantly, the bell ran! I let out a loud yay. Smugle, the Wolves came up to us,
“It doesn’t mater what you think, does it?”
I would double check your spelling and punctuation but other than that it was really good- you allways have a really unique scenario and this one was especially creative!
I hope your dooing good 🙂
*doing
Great sentence of 3 to show the urgency of the sprint to the car!I wonder, who had won?
Check your spelling carefully before you submit Olivia.
Very effective opening, Olivia. Like an establishing shot in animation, you put your reader in the story straight away. As Mrs Murrin commented, I want to know who won?