March
26
The army of the statues
One quiet morning when I just got out there was a army of statues in front of my house but why were here what’s the meaning of this. after I’ve done every I need to do in a few minutes I swiftly went got out of my small hut I started firing a swift bullet at one of statues then.BOOM! it exploded like bombs then a chain reaction just started.
A shockwave knocked me off my two feet ten cruises were exploded in a mere ten seconds same with the fifty homes in the range of the blast the silence.
Great work
“A shock-wave knocked me off my two feet…” this is really dramatic.
Have you checked that all your sentences started with capital letters?
Mrs Murrin