March
25
Alma…By Lewis
Alma was skipping in the snow, touching the walls on the way. She was laughing all the way. She wrote her name on a giant chalkboard there were many more names on the wall.
Then there was a doll of her in the abandoned shop. she tried opening the door but it didn’t work. She threw a snowball at the door and it opened.
She sneaked inside and looked around, seeing dolls everywhere. Then she saw her doll in a different place. But then a doll on a tricycle banged into her.
Alma sounds very cheerful from your first paragraph Lewis.
Lots of sentences start with the word SHE. Can you use some edingly words to start your sentences?
Mrs Murrin
Great work Lewis!
Alma sounds very happy for a sad/horror movie. I live how well you’ve painted the scene in my head- even if I hadn’t of watched Alma I would kno exactly what happened from your work.
Stay safe- Jess.
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