March
23
A Hawaiian adventure Isabelle
Opening my curtains, the sun blinded me. It was the first day of my holiday in Hawaii. My excitement was incontrollable. I threw on my clothes, woke my little sister up and sprinted down the glamorous hotel stairs. During breakfast we discussed what we are going to do today. After a lot of consideration we decided to go and see the human like statuses meters from the beach. As a treat I decided to hire a buggy to spend the whole day with.
There they were, Human like status. Right in front of my very eyes. It is absolutely spectacular.
Lovely opening Isabelle, I felt excited myself! The human satues were a good idea, they are always so strange. Before I publish it on the 100 word challenge would you have a look at the way you’ve spelt statues and there should be some punctuation after the phrase that starts with an ing sentence – can you spot it?
“I threw on my clothes, woke my little sister up and sprinted down the glamorous hotel stairs.” Great sentence of 3 Isabelle- good pace and sense of impatience.
Check the prefix on incontrollable.
Mrs Murrin