January 14

The Cliff by Oliver

 

As the car climbed up the cliff slowly, the music blasted loud. I turned the music down because I had to concentrate on the road.

When I got up to the top of the cliff  in the vehicle the furry dice dangling I looked down I was up too high.

I drove down the cliff slowly and looked carefully otherwise I would fall and die. I continued on the road carefully. when I got down the cliff I set off into the distance. a few minutes later I had reached safety before the cliff collapsed. I watched  the cliff crumble.

 

 


Posted January 14, 2020 by oliver20 in category Uncategorized

3 thoughts on “The Cliff by Oliver

  1. Terry Team 100WC UK

    Hi Oliver, wow this is a tense situation and good on you for getting safely down the cliff, just in time. A well written and well put together 100WC piece, thank you and well done.

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  2. Mrs P (Team 100WC)

    Hi Oliver
    I think you have used all the prompts for this 100WC in a really natural way. How frightening it would be to see a cliff crumble! Next time remember to re-read your writing, especially for punctuation. It makes it much easier for the reader to understand your writing.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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