January
14
New Years Day. 100 word challenge by Cameron
New years eve, eleven fifty eight I was on the London Eye ready for the best spot of the firework show.
I looked down out the window and saw thousands of people. I saw one person climbing a vehicle and about one hundred had already climbed their cars. Then suddenly, I heard people start shouting. Five. Four. Three. Two.
Then in the speed of a blink, fire came out from the nozzle of the firework decpencer. I started to freak out because the glass was breaking, a piece fell and sliced thr
ough my furry coat. Slowly, I fainted to Music.
it is funny and cool
Wow, that was an ending I was not expecting! I like how you set up the beginning of the story. Even though I do not know what or where the “London Eye” is, I can still understand your story because you explained that it is the best place to view the fireworks show.
Good job and keep writing,
Mrs. Silver
Team 100
Illinois, USA