January
14
100 Word Challenge The Climbing Wall by Louis
I turned around, locked the door and headed towards the car. Rain bellowed from out of the clouds but my furry coat covered me. I jumped in my vehicle. The rain suddenly turned into hail. It smashed at my car heavily as I turned the music on. Driving steadily, I put the windscreen wiper on full, put the seat warmer on and strained my eyes to see the road.
I was here. Towering over me were the climbing walls.
Soon, I was ready to start. Slowly, I climbed as high as I could on every wall. It was such fun.
Well done Louis nice work I like it
Dear Louis,
I really liked your story. The beginning of your story made me interested. I have been to a climbing wall before. It is really fun. Have you been to a climbing wall before?
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Amazing work Louis good use of a power of three sentence.