October
15
100 word challenge – Heavy fishing – Arthur
Buzzing with excitement, I hopped into the old, weathered motor boat, fishing rod in hand. With hopes high, I pulled the choke. The growling rumble set me in paradise. Skimming across sky-blue, icy water, I would be at Crab Cove in minutes, then drive to the warm lagoon to collect supplies.
Recklessly, I threw the tarp behind a towering rock, whipped off my torn shirt and rode out. I tossed the line into glassy water, cut the motor and waited
The scorching sun inflamed my back. Something caught the line and yanked me in – it was heavier than I expected!
Great writing Arthur bur remember punctuation
Me and Jake loved your work the description was amazing Zoe
Great story Authur! Your story had excellent use of vocabulary
Good Job Arthur but remember the punctuation
GRT KEP TI UPP
Hello.
Going fishing on a warm day sounds like wonderful. I wonder what was so heavy?
Thanks for sharing your story.
Dinah
#100wc
Hello Arthur,
Good story. It sounds like a peaceful fishing trip. I wonder what was so heavy that it dragged someone into the water.
Thanks for sharing.
Dinah
#100wc
Yeah Arthur that was amazing pls do a chapter 2