October
15
100 Word challenge Frank
It was heavier then I expected, as the stone sampled in the glimmering sun as my hands quivered as I tried to lift it. Calling to my dad as trying to get help.
My tummy rumbled ready for food.
Going red as I lifted the stone into my palm. Walking into the kitchen, I plonked it on the table as I malted onto the chair.
Calling for mum asking if she had ordered anything, There was a growl over my shoulder. She snapped at me, said “Go up to your room now” I ran up the stairs. then slammed door.
I enjoyed the story but there was alot of as’s in it. Loved the different sentence starters