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The ultimate phoenix by Sebastien
Hundreds of years ago, in the land of myth, there lived a family of phoenixes in a cave in Phoenix Volcano. It was a family of 5; Pyro was the farther, Fire feather was the mother, Flamar was the oldest child, Smoke wing was the second oldest child and finally Fume, the youngest child. Fume was different to the others. He bore powers not only of a phoenix, but a dragon. A storm dragon.
4 years later, Fume tried his first flight. he copied his brothers and jumped then spread his large wings. When he didn’t fly he fell down the volcano…
Great work and I really like the choice of names – very appropriate to the scene!