October
2
Something is out there by Tulisa
The day is bright .Is anybody out there? I said i’ll see. Clouds started to turned black and covered the sky with it’s only power. The creepiest thing just happened. A shadow came out of the forest and tackled me from behind no one will ever find out what happened. She called her brother’s Jackson, Jake and two sister’s Zoe, Elana then they came out Jake is the oldest one. There was a cut in my back oozing out blood from a shadow bite. Jake with his new car that was a truck Jake bumped the shadow nothing happened it stopped time when you hit it.It was are enemy. There was a rocket were going to test it out i’t didn’t work out as planed it failed.
Dear Tulisa,
I liked how you included creepy details in your story. Will you make a part two? Come check out my blog at
https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/7v4ovp4knz0vg8poglr4wp8w9
I liked your story and how it had a twist.
-Shaela
Thank you everybody now you all made me happy.