October
2
Cosmic By Jess
The Sky was blue and clear, rainclouds were nowhere near.
There was a glint in my eye, I was ready to die if it meant I was going cosmic.
It was time to take of, I was going to Mars I would see the stars!
But when it just wouldn’t take off, my dreams were crushed but I’ll never stop!
Thunderclouds surrounded the empty stage, all was lost and lightning popped, but I guess I’ll never go cosmic…
Hanging my head, booms filled the air, this was just stupid!
Why’d I think I could do it?
I’ll never go cosmic.
By Jess
Very good piece of writing
Very good keep it up