Huge Statue – by Louis
Silence.
Still water surrounded the huge lake. I looked forward as the oaks stand on the tattered grass. The bark cracking by every footstep. The song of the vibrant birds filled the back of my brain. Out of the corner of my eye, bubbling overrides the sound of the vivid birds.
Suddenly, copper tubes were entangled with each other as they slowly rose from the distinctive water. Higher and higher it went as it lent its huge head back. Still going, it’s eyes gazed into the milk, white clouds and the ocean blue canvas. The golden sun reflected into the smooth, mirror-like lake.
The water cascaded out of the back of the solitary statue. CRASH! The translucent water hit the liquid like an army of soldiers trying to demolish a deserted village. The huge splash akin a whale jumping for joy.
good Lewis
really good my dude
great writing louis how are you doing
WELL DONE LEWIS!!!!
Pretty good, needs some editing. Liking the tension my dude. Arthur
Your a great writer
Amazing Louis! How do you do it?
Isabelle
He is a great writer
He sure is.
I really like your title. Needs some looking back on. keep reading.
Are you good my dude. YOU are riding the writing wave my dude!