September
26
Badeko’s perspective Olivia
Badeko’s perspective
The night was dark,very dark. I scuttled from my cosy underground nest witch was sheered by the bone a white tree. My lichen shone in the moon light of the quarter moon witch settled in the distance. I crept out of the trees and the leaves with a crackle. Just then , the ring of houses, tonight number 3!
At the house, leant down and tasted the flavour of pumpkin and wool ;I new this was the old one .I searched for more and this time the girls fire dreams came to me .I decided to devour that dream. Just then, I tasted the zest of new grass ,warm milk and sorghum biscuits .The boy dream pt too.This was the best dram that I had tonight.
After I ate it was only a snack. Always hungry. Always thirsty.
Olivia
Nice piece of writing
Really nice writing
good Lewis
Pretty good, remember capital letters
great writing but you misspelt which
Very good piece of writing. Only thing is in pargraph 1sentence 3 is you forgot skin after lichen.
Isabelle
Love the tension
good well done liv
I LOVE IT WELL DONE!!!
well done i love your writing
Really good. Remember spaces after punctuation.